Magsy has beta'd it this weekend, so it's almost ready to go up...
(I also wrote approx 1,500 more words of Cry Havoc this weekend \0/)
Incidentally, Magsy, this still gets two very enthusiastic thumbs up from me. I especially love this line: when one whispered ‘sweetheart’ could chill his skin and stir his cock, filling him with shame and revulsion even as the dark desire took over and his baser instincts shouted down the fear in its need for the kind of pleasure that only Jared’s mouth, tongue, cock and words could provide..
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Date: 2010-12-02 07:54 pm (UTC)(I also wrote approx 1,500 more words of Cry Havoc this weekend \0/)
Incidentally, Magsy, this still gets two very enthusiastic thumbs up from me. I especially love this line: when one whispered ‘sweetheart’ could chill his skin and stir his cock, filling him with shame and revulsion even as the dark desire took over and his baser instincts shouted down the fear in its need for the kind of pleasure that only Jared’s mouth, tongue, cock and words could provide..
You win :D