YAY! You posted it! I'm so happy you asked me to read this over, I'm enjoying the story so much. Favorite parts:
Dean wiped the whiskey from his mouth and was surprised to taste the sharp metallic taste of blood. He looked down and saw the ragged wounds across his knuckles, an echo of the scars spread across his entire body. Something about Dean with bloody knuckles pushes my buttons :-)
Hell may have wiped him clean of his scars, but in the past few months they had returned them, with interest. Sweet phrasing!!
They were so close to the end now, the fires of hell were staring at them in the face, this last seal was everything, and Lilith had found it first. The fires of hell thing makes me nervous, and the fact that Lilith found the last seal first...yikes.
Although, sometimes Dean did find this faith, this belief, that the angel had placed on him, almost like a weight around his neck,... I like this because it's reality. That an angel with all these powers had faith in a regular person, and the whole world's weight is on his shoulders. **pets poor Dean**
snarky smite happy former wrestler in angels clothing.. HAHAHAHA
“So what’s the deal this time? Are they raising another demon, unleashing some more pissed off spirits, or are they just going to force everyone to eat tofu?” Dean asked. “What unholy hell do they have planned to break open this baby?” TOFU JOKE FTW!! So like Dean to make a crack at a time like this.
“None of the above,” Castiel replied... LOL, Castiel has been spending too much time with Dean. he's rubbing off on him. Awesome!
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Date: 2008-12-10 02:19 am (UTC)Dean wiped the whiskey from his mouth and was surprised to taste the sharp metallic taste of blood. He looked down and saw the ragged wounds across his knuckles, an echo of the scars spread across his entire body. Something about Dean with bloody knuckles pushes my buttons :-)
Hell may have wiped him clean of his scars, but in the past few months they had returned them, with interest. Sweet phrasing!!
They were so close to the end now, the fires of hell were staring at them in the face, this last seal was everything, and Lilith had found it first. The fires of hell thing makes me nervous, and the fact that Lilith found the last seal first...yikes.
Although, sometimes Dean did find this faith, this belief, that the angel had placed on him, almost like a weight around his neck,... I like this because it's reality. That an angel with all these powers had faith in a regular person, and the whole world's weight is on his shoulders. **pets poor Dean**
snarky smite happy former wrestler in angels clothing.. HAHAHAHA
“So what’s the deal this time? Are they raising another demon, unleashing some more pissed off spirits, or are they just going to force everyone to eat tofu?” Dean asked. “What unholy hell do they have planned to break open this baby?” TOFU JOKE FTW!! So like Dean to make a crack at a time like this.
“None of the above,” Castiel replied... LOL, Castiel has been spending too much time with Dean. he's rubbing off on him. Awesome!
I can't wait to see what happens in Smallville!