Date: 2011-03-29 09:56 pm (UTC)
you made me cry THREE TIMES WOMAN! THREE!

And I love you for it

Gale’s own insecurity of what wanting Randy, wanting another man meant
I love this, its the central theme to what eventually broke down the relationship. Such a simple line but with soooo many repercussions.

There should be a sound, something sharp and destructive when two worlds collide with such force, instead there was silence.
This is how the world ends...not with a bang, but a whimper! Love this line so much baby

I loved him first
Oh Gale you poor poor baby. *huggles Gale*

"Do you love him like you love me?" Gale interrupted.

"No," Randy stated the truth baldly. "But we've built a life together and I need to talk to him, need to, I don't know...."

"Break his heart gently?" Gale stated softly.

"Yes, I owe him the truth, you get that right?"

"Course I do, I just want to know you are serious about this. I lost you once Randy, through my own stupidity, I can’t do it again. This time its for keeps yes?"


OH BOYS *clutches heart*

I need you to leave me, cos I can't leave you, and as long as you are here I can’t push you away, so please Gale if you love me, if you really love me, please go."
Ok right here...HERE is where I start crying. Every damn time woman, honestly. I can almost imagine the pain in Randy's voice and GUH!

Whatever they shared it was strong enough to break them, to break both of them and everyone around them.
EPIC LOVE FOR THIS LINE!

"It's ok Randy, really it is, I'm going to be ok, you need to go home, be with your family and I'll call you, ok, just give me some time ok?"
This reminds of the bit in 13 Going On 30 when she says at the end "You're my best friend Matty, I love you..." whilst holding the pink dream house and she's bawling and then I cry and yeah, its one big cry fest!

Truly incredible writing here my darling girl, wonderful and angsty and heartbreaking and real.

*klisses*



I missed a spelling mistake!

"No," Gale interjected. "Don't you dare, don't you fucking dare Randy, you do not get to back out not Should be "now" not "not"!



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